【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 x# b" w/ [' F% @, E歌词我附在后面。
8 S6 W0 q' a4 X: n! LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ w8 p( J1 m2 e  Q& tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: }8 q: ]1 o; o* b6 [$ X9 @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 N5 b- @0 f% q# F( r8 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: r3 \( ?. I+ I- `8 J, w7 UYou needn’t fear anything
- U8 y# a2 J! Y& M4 K  V! b8 P  OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 v+ ~7 a6 f* N# T( J& @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( ^" ~  w) W1 f( V- pI love you I love you with all my heart
0 ]% r; z6 c( V- e+ F6 K7 c) ^, E) r) d1 v1 wNothing can compare to my love
: K; }- q& {; N0 X+ K9 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 P) p# a& Z! QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& D) F0 r8 ^+ w% j* KI regret not dying
" ^; o2 i" ?* M) m7 s+ s" t( A- _1 RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) P$ }4 Q. F' n; @6 T' JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, j( G8 j4 Q3 \4 C" K  x. fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; t  E/ m% _5 \4 o! ?, M% [3 `# h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) g( A4 |! G% N6 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 u) I7 V# o+ y4 E4 q; l! M) h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, J+ C4 q+ j( K; f5 [1 P7 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 r$ j+ F: e% a' J8 s- g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ F3 ]& D. Z9 a! U+ D+ j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; f; Z% ~% s9 Y7 {! l" @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" A3 h! W+ a5 R8 M; b( s, `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: y9 ?1 s) G1 n  w0 ^' K9 z* O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- N! }  R' D) {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) g8 n. W- P) \9 K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; l; F' z4 j  @# C+ {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 d. _! u+ C( H. @% ]  Q6 K, E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 L* d/ l* n3 Z& Y' m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- E. \# f: {$ }; v2 ?& o' Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ R. y8 L. X9 {* K5 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- V' t, I1 l% C- R1 d; m9 ^) L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* l; T! e  G: i1 s3 _4 y& i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 r! q/ C3 B" s) A, w2 ~4 {/ d<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: N/ l; L# G, ^" m7 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 O% b& C3 U. _3 G2 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 }* C7 J% ], D$ f8 n+ g0 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 `6 }1 J) C% l2 z! A4 A% o: t; p<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 v1 ~! k" x1 E; P/ x( Q4 }& h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 S" M* ], K( t' i0 g, M0 i# T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; J# t/ `: i7 B) r! {# c<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 C9 E6 J& m& ^/ c9 k; e" w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 A7 Y& b. m6 ^  d, l' T$ t& R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 p/ d) b) E7 n& v# a0 C! U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' s" F) a4 N. @6 I' x! `. u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ n* }4 A* I( E- B" O) y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 \2 I% [- c0 I1 x0 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 u6 H" Z/ W. o( I  U* U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' u% p/ T" C! Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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& O% r% v: `+ m8 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>