【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 C# D0 h+ z; ]+ K2 N歌词我附在后面。
8 a' J, J% h; Z& [# KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 I( Z4 T1 L" tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' O! _$ n+ l" B  a0 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* v! b0 S6 v9 ^3 ~The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. n/ c+ N- C( s/ X) M0 o9 QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( @9 f$ N$ G1 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 |  W9 y' y7 E) R3 e  ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 F+ H! R) t* sI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: \/ o& A* U$ K( \6 S2 ]! uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 o) M$ m( v: C, G; a  W# W' R, VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) I9 g* B4 y# K0 q9 E4 UI’m still filled with fear
" ^0 I' u3 h+ p  ~  EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. t- p2 R3 L$ r' A3 CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 |# w. B. R% U; k6 C$ L6 _! ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! k0 o* I. [8 `0 c& ]/ e; H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# z" W8 t# N3 ?$ x1 o! i9 q& }8 B+ ^% |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ }5 Z4 ^" ]5 j- j# H" @% a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! O! w" F2 I; y. m) j' A1 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 G5 c) l9 R+ d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ Y  r* q6 H; n7 {5 Q' k8 j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) X+ r/ u, M5 m, L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' ~* I3 ]/ q5 G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 c. u9 u( {- e5 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& d9 l7 x" w% z7 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 T1 f- Z1 C4 g, h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( D1 G3 x9 M5 g2 p4 u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 C7 K8 v* a9 d# c+ |: i# l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  _* a. i# p' J% t8 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 z$ g: ?/ Y0 z5 {. e& \3 X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ x* R# Q! e3 @' T8 T5 l, t  @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ Y/ y8 A& R3 Q" C6 P$ S* H! a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 m* o# S9 p/ S  p5 Z2 W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: W- y  H2 `) T# H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* D( h4 f' t, r' Q0 U7 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  s% K) Z3 O5 ^5 G, y" ~; P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ w+ l# q' Q% L0 Y7 t& o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. D' d6 q+ L5 \8 x+ R3 p" D2 Y- K! j( k1 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 \: y* A! A- P0 z4 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- u/ ]! j" L: m+ r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 h% a  v: H% k( @  T* i3 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" C6 p/ E% N0 V3 ]7 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& ]; \  o4 _8 A% ?3 u4 l: |* r我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>